4 October 2016

Dialogue Scenarios



In the above scene I have written a man trying to ask a woman out.

1 comment:

  1. There is some good writing here Callum but it's a bit let down by spelling and punctuation errors, and poor proofreading. Read the very first scene direction back to yourself. How many errors can you spot? It's a pity because as I say some aspect of the writing show real potential. Where are the other three scenarios?

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